I like to eat paddys,
I am going to get fatty.
Paddy’s are yum,
They feel good in my tum.
Paddy’s are made from meat,
They taste so sweet.
I love eating paddy’s
especially made by my daddy.
Misiotei what a fantastic rhyming poem and I like the way you tell me about the food Patties that is my favourite food nice one. The most thing about your writing is how you told us on your story that your dad makes patties so I think that your dad is a chief.
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Misiotei what a fantastic rhyming poem and I like the way you tell me about the food Patties that is my favourite food nice one. The most thing about your writing is how you told us on your story that your dad makes patties so I think that your dad is a chief.
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